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Light me aflame

Light me aflame
So I'll feel on the outside
which I feel on the inside
I feel so torn and conflicted
on rather or not I should trust you.
or believe myself
Myself, someone I've known for 16 years
or you, someone I've known for one.
Myself, someone I'll have to live with no matter what
or you, someone who will, at the slightest sense of pain I have, you blame yourself
You, someone who'll be gone... Too soon.

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Written February 23rd, 2004

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  • February 24, 2004
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    hmmm if this poem is true..well its sad.. but very well written. Great job.
    ***et3rnaldarkn3ss***