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Tooooo much

You think you're not enough
Truth is you're too much
You're more then enough
and I feel so insignificant
I feel so small
I fail
F for the Day
I feel so small
I feel so small
It's too much
you're too much
It's all too much

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Written February 23rd, 2004

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  • Samsonite
    July 1, 2004
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    Nice write here! I like it. F for the day. I liked that. It gives a good feeling of what you were trying to get at in this. Keep up the good work!
    -Samson-


  • February 24, 2004
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    Grrrrrrrrrrreat!!!

    Damn !! that was awesome!!!!! i loved it!!!
    ***et3rnaldarkn3ss***