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Pointless

Pointless
Schools numbered apprentice
Fool-hardy
Conformist soldiers
They run the world
World War III
Nazi Regime all over again
exterminate the individuals
exterminate
Schools are the new concentration camps
Look like I've gotta be serving my time

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Written February 23rd, 2004

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  • February 24, 2004
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    sO true...great way of putting it into words and especially into a poem.
    much respect!!!
    ***et3rnaldarkn3ss***