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Houdini

Prove me wrong
Take the pain away
Like you do
That special way by just looking into my eyes
with their unconditional love
It feels so amazing
Like a piece of proverbial heaven
when I'm with you
you take it all away
when I'm with you
You finally found a way
To make me smile
Make me happy
I'll smile for miles
Just to be in your arms

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A cliché piece of shit.
Written February 23rd, 2004

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  • February 24, 2004
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    awwww...that poem was so sweet...purtyful.
    ***et3rnaldarkn3ss***