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[But its time to face the truth, i will never be with you]

Come, take a look,
better believe it, its the truth.
It pains me to say it too,
that my wish of being with you, will never come true.

What would have happened,
if you were out with me that night?
I think you would've cried,
oh, no, probably died.

And for me,
i'd scold myself for my wishful thinking,
scream at myself for my hoping,
that you would ever be mine someday.

Like i've said,
its time to face the truth, i'll never be with you.
I guess i will feel blue for some time,
but that's my punishment for committing this crime.

Though sometimes i really wonder,
why oh why can't i have you.
Yet, in my heart the answer lies,
just get over him, it advises.

So now, i'll pretend, I'M SO OVER YOU.
but guess what, that lie's overdue.

Author notes

Oh well, was giving some advice to grumpybrat20 about her poem and ended up having her convince me to put my advice onto my page. Hahas, anyway, tell me what you think of it

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  • I feel the same way about a certain girl. But time heals all I guess. Great write. Xds-gX

  • Great

    great


  • Antebellum
    March 26
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    so much emotion. fantastic job.


  • A dEaD dReAm
    February 23

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    this poem is amazing i loved it.....i miss reading your poems...i love how you put so much emotion into themmm.....i loved it keep it up...love katelynn


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    February 23
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    like I mentioned before, good poem


  • StillLovingYou
    February 22
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    omg you put it as a poem i am glad you did you did such a good job!!

  • lowercase prelude gold member
    February 22

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    Good poem
    Sometimes it's hard to get over someone, but once you do, it's easier to move on with life (sometimes, anyways)

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