The cat and the rat sat on the mat,
The cat ran off the mat,
And the rat ran right up to the cat.
The rat sat on the mat,
And the cat jumped away from the rat,
When the cat came back,
He found the rat eating the mat!
Author notes
My 6 year old 'sister' saw me writing poems and decided she wanted to write one too...that is what she came out with! i thought it was really cute!! comments would be appreciated as she is only 6! and points will be rewarded! thanks x
I hope this doesnt trigger anything for any one. Please leave me a comment, good, bad, what ever you feel. Just please be a little sensative as they are all true stories about my life so far x
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Aw, that's so cute!
I bet she'll be a great poet when she's older.
Tell her congrats, it's a hit. lol
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this is really good for a 6 year old! tell your sister she did a great job
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this is hilarious. Your sister has talent. It's a really cute idea. I loved it, good job and well written goes to your sister.
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wow your sister is a natural born poet! if you would have told me a college professor wrote it i would still think it's genius and be like.. that college professor is very clever!
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AWWW! That is soo adorable and its honestly a good poem! Wow this made me smile a whole lot! Shes uber cutee!!! =]
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Haha! How cute! Your sister has a great rhyme scheme going on here
Tell her to pen on and someday she can have her own allpoetry and we will comment on her lovely poems.
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This is really a cute poem. Hurray for your 6 year old sister! She did an excellent job at it. I enjoyed this poem. It made me chuckle. I read it to my mother and she chuckled as well. We both enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing this.
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Yaaaai Its So Cute!!!! XD
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Woot woot
So adorable. I'm sure your sister will go far in life with a poem like this. -
Very Good.
I just cant believe the cat didnt eat the rat.But them mats can be tasty with some maple and brown sugar.Good job girl.Keep it up
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Its cuuuuuuute. haha. for a six year old its real good. She be a great writer one day!
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This is really sweet. I'm glad she's starting writing so early. If she likes it enough she'll be a great writer. I wish I had started so young. Tell her she's the best 6 year old writer I've seen so far!
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for a six year old thats brilliant, and its really nice of you to take notice. that's what we older siblings are for tho eh. anyways tell her all the big people thought she was excellent lol
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Aha we have a new poet of great potential. Her poems run ragged with the mind. Cats and rats chasing each other.. I loved it..*clap* Well done great little poet you shall go to the top of the class. A gold trophy winner for sure.
Love to the Little One AngelofLight xxx
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Aw your right this is cool. A soon to be poet.
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Aw thats so cute lol
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She is so cute!
Your little sister sounds adorable.
This is the cutest thing I have read all day, it is so funny. Very creative for such a small little kid.
Tell her that some weird chick you know on the internets said this was the best little poem ever, and that she is very talented.
~~MakeADifference
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