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When Magic Takes Flight

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WHEN MAGIC TAKES FLIGHT

 

Magic in the air, touches soft,
thoughts drift on clouds aloft.
Share time and space beyond,
create mutual feelings so fond.

Smile, be happy, on this day,
feel strange but in a nice way.
Touches gentle, warm breeze,
fly in dreams above the leas.

Like flowers washed with rain,
brought me back to life again.
Hand in hand lead me there,
fly high above skies so fair.

Be my eyes and show me all,
beauty seen as twilight falls.
Be my hands and let me feel,
love's warmth, soft and real.

Be my ears that I may hear,
tenderly on midnight clear.
Be my lips, then sweetly kiss,
fill the night with magic bliss.

Let time stand still, never end,
fly forever with me dear friend.
Passion felt from deep within,
let this magical journey begin.


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  • chiefmac
    February 22, 2009

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    Lovely prompt, the poem will stand alone and compliment the picture. Love is in the air and magic taken them to star light that hold desires warm. The promise to be happy with blissful kiss and dear friend exchange passion. The reader has images to follow through as magic moments glisten betweeen lovers


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 23, 2009
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      Good Morning Dan

      Thank you for the wonderful comment. Always enjoy your thoughts on my writing. I hope you have a wonderful week dear friend. Hugs and Smiles.

      Bless You,
      Sandy


  • Midnite-Rae
    February 21, 2009

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    The poem is sweet and like love, full of magic.
    I absolutely loved this poem. "Let time stand still, never end,
    fly forever with me dear friend.
    Passion felt from deep within,
    let this magical journey begin."<-- that is a wonderful ending and my favorite stanza. You did an amazing job. Keep up the great work.


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 23, 2009
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      Thank you for the lovely comment. So nice toi hear from you. Hugs and smiles. Sandy, Ap mom

  • Liquid memories
    February 21, 2009

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    Wonderful

    My youth was filled with dreams, magical ones, flying in the air, traveling to distant places. Ahhhh, I was a dreamer, and my dreams kept me alive with hope of a better tomorow and the future. Thank you kindly for the sweet memories.


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 23, 2009
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      Hello My Friend

      So glad my poem could bring back some nice memories. Always a pleasure to have you stop by. Hugs for you. Take care, Sandy .


  • Wesley Storer
    February 21, 2009

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    Gprgeous

    Pennsylvania has one gorgeous poet with a gorgeous spirt. That would be you dear. Pennsylvania also has one wonderful football team called the Steelers. I'm so weary of Winter? Are you? God bless you and best wishes always.


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 23, 2009
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      Good Morning Wes

      Always a pleasure to read your thoughts on my poetry. This comment was so lovely and brought me a smile. Thank you dear friend. Hope all is well with you. Hugs and Smiles across many miles. Sandy


  • LittleMoon silver member
    February 21, 2009

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    What a sweet write, full of hope and dreams and someone to share them with. A magical journey of discovery, wonderful. Sheila


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 23, 2009
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      Good Morning Shelia,

      A pleasure to read your comment this morning. Thank you for stopping by. Hope you had a wonderful weekend. Take care.

      Blessings, Sandy


  • Clovis6790Curious silver member
    February 21, 2009

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    Superb Plus

    A very fine write, indeed. As usual, imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • penman gold member
    February 21, 2009
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    Excellent

    This truly was a magical write. So very creative and well expressed. Thank you for sharing.


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 22, 2009
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      Wonderful Comment

      Thank you for the wonderful comment. I appreciate it coming from you. Take care, Hugs and smiles, Sandy


  • amysticwriter silver member
    February 21, 2009
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    Beautiful Sandy, I love the magic the pen creates in poetry...nice...Mystic...


    • Sandygram silver member
      February 21, 2009
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      Thank You Mystic

      I appreciate you stopping by and reading. Your comment was very nice. Poetry is full of magic and wonder. It can take you anywhere your muse wants to travel.
      You take care. Sandy


  • NanohaSakura
    February 21, 2009

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    I love this poem it brings me with light that I would be able to share with others my love and memories. I thank you and I cant wait to read another one of your poems. See you then!

    • Sandygram silver member
      February 21, 2009
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      Lovely Comment

      Thank you for stopping by and reading. It is appreciated. Take care, Sandy

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