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broken soul

My broken soul cries for you

in this world of loneliness

what is it that I shall do 

cover, cry, and grief

my heart is torn asunder

life long love is taken away

never shall I hear your voice

not in this sad, sad day

come back to me my lover

take me and hold me close

cries of horror in the summer

thunder rolls, emotions run high

shiped out from the world tonight

death comes with the breaking dawn

laying in my bed so sweet

the note by my side

telling you that I LOVE YOU

and never twill we ever again meet

cold, lifeless body that is all thats left

no heart to beat in this woman's breast.

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  • liltulip gold member
    February 23, 2009

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    heartbreaking

    but breathtakingly beautiful words you have shared with us here, thank you so much, so a wonderful write...good luck!


  • hearts blossoms
    February 23, 2009

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    strong and powerful heartbreak here, its nice in flow though would of been better with some stanzas, breaks it up
    strong imagery aswell
    abigail