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Pardon

Excuse me
You have my heart
could I have it back??
Someone actually wants it
Please hand it over.
Uncuff me.
I'll do anything to get away from your greedy hands.
But, before I do.
I need that one thing back you.
Please?

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Written February 23rd, 2004

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  • April 5, 2004
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    WOw..
    That one was pOweRfUL...I loved how u asked ...
    "Excuse me..You have my heart...COULD i have It bacK???" that was tight...great work...