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sun sinking slowly

sun sinking slowly
black velvet night imminent
shadows on the run

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    March 6

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    I love your ending. Great choice of imagery. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It’s an honor to have you show your work here!

  • lightwing
    March 3

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    I loved this piece. It has such a lovely flow and excellent imagery contained in so few words. I really liked your use of contrast and movement they describe the sunset and oncoming night perfectly. Good luck in the contest.