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The King of the Night

As the fog subsides,
My love awakes.
The night disappears
And his dream breaks.

In it he was king
His castle was fair.
From sunrise to sunset
In his chair he sat with care.

But his grand kingdom,
Safe was it not.
For near came a rumbling,
And lava, hot.

My love then awoke.
Was he scared? Maybe.
I picked him up with a hug,
For my love is my baby.

Author notes

This is for my little cousins♥♥♥

LOVE WORD BANK
Baby, care, dream, fog, night, king, love, lava, chair, sunset.

This is probably a little different than the contest intended, but I think it mostly works. =D Great contest!!

~Dreamer42morrow~

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