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Amber

Golden tresses
adorn her lovely face,
deep blue eyes
    still hint innocence...

A genuine beauty,
    like her mother ~

she's not mine,

 

    but


I want her to know

    I love her.

 

 

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"Not Daddy's Girl"
30 Words or less

For Lisa's daughter, Amber, in dedication. In case she doesn't know...

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A contest entry

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 22

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    A lovely tribute to what a father really is...whether birth or other wise...sweet and loving.
    Best to all of you!

    Thanks for sharing!
    mystic

    :f


  • maralisa silver member
    February 21

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    aw wow this wonderful very deep and touchingly beautiful good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Soft-Rain
    February 21
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    She will adore this!!!!!!!!!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 21

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    awwww, thats so lovely, im sure shell adore this. good luck in the contest and take care
    Stephanie ♥