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Carnaval.(Triolet)

Carnaval
Let us make merry
With stranger or pal
Carnaval
Of course include your gal
Enjoy, don't hurry
Carnaval
Let us make merry

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  • Mari Goes gold member
    February 26
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    This is a lovely triolet Bill. The line 'Of course include your gal' made me think of something very interesting that happens during carnaval in Rio; many young couples prefer to have a 4 days 'break', and get back together when the party is over.
    Thanks for playing the Carnival here