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It's always the last place you looked fof it



Roses are red,
  It's always the same old song.

Once I find it I keep on look'n
  Jus' to prove  'em wrong!


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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    July 6

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    That's about all we can do sometimes... Prove 'em wrong, and sing that song!! Keep your muse's pen flowing, Poet!!
    Peace & hugs,
    xx Cyn xx