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The wall in our face

my matrimonial home is far from here.
mummy's love has come to stay.
Am single with no heart to spare,
home shall be near some day.
when then your love shall glare my grey.

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  • Lunarli
    July 10
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    great

    I love this one. Very well expressed.

  • Wisdom 1
    May 5
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    love ie

    the lines are good

  • ahh this is great love the middle line!


  • penman gold member
    March 20
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    Wonderful

    Very well expressed. A excellent choice of words. Thank you for sharing


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 22

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    Nice flow and word choice...creative take on the prompt...best.

    Thank you for sharing!
    mystic

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