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Subway

I see you in the subway,
And decide to say 'hey'
But you look past me and say
"Get out of my way."

I see you the next day,
And say 'hey'.
This time you turn red and walk away.

I don't see you for a bit,
But I know I won't quit,

Because I am determined to be with you,
Just like a burglar is eager to escape to Timbuktu.

 

I hope that we'll be together someday

Just like a former shop addict wishes that she could go on Ebay.

 

I see you again in the mall,

But when I go to greet you,

 

You trip over and fall,

But then I catch you and say 'close call!'

 

Thank goodness I caught you before you hit the ground,

But you remained speechless and made no sound.

 

As I lifted you up and put you back on your feet,

 I said "I was afraid we weren't ever going to meet."

 

You blushed and said 'hey',

 And I said, "Let's go out, starting today." 

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