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.:Random Poem Of Thoughts:.

My mind surrounded by all this confusion.

Depression and Isolation,
I hold my hand out to you
Hoping that I wont have to lose you too.

I lost too many friends before.

But I cant stand to lose anymore.

Especially Someone so close to me.

Someone that love me for the crazy hyper me.

I know wishes don't come true.

But this is the only wish I want to come through.

Star light
Star Bright.

I wish for the wish I wish tonight.

I don't want to lose you out of my sight.

Trust me, I wont give up with out a fight.

I will try, try and try again.

Till these uneasy feelings come to an end.


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[LOVELESS SUICIDE]

~The worst pain to feel other than Death is losing the ones you love~

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  • stevencorklad
    November 19
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    Excellent.

  • I can relate to this so much.
    I absolutely loved reaing this poem, it was well written and it clearly shows the emotion you were trying to portrey. Keep up the great work =)


  • Tadd
    March 3
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    well writen