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Untangled~

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Untangled~

 

She’s subdued by demanding vocal cords,

red violins strum shaded symphonies

Whips to her ass-cheeks, like tongues to cherries,

slicing more than the crack below arched spine.

 

Pleasure lashes upon lavender skin,

go together like a pin through a hinge

Where darkness is tasting bitter sweetness,

relentless rope liberates loyalty.

 

On the edge of ecstasy’s emotion,

candle wax singes sensual bosoms

Flaunting desires between wanton thighs,

as drops drip deeper flesh confessions.

 

With three degrees of aroused agony,

her flawless fragrance speaks to my senses

Dominant in long lasting devotions,

submissive in her inner most sanctum.

 

Twisting the tides as her eyes turn upward,

feeling my love owns her trust eternal

Her outer shell saturated with wounds,

as I listen to her body language.

 

My willingness is taught to be taunted,

but I breathe each moment in pain's splendor

I surrender my kisses to commands,

switching roles in servitude, she is now...

 

un-t a n g l e d.

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  • Exodus gold member
    March 31

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    This line right here "relentless rope liberates loyalty" said so much. God I think you could just have that line and I'd be blown away. Lovely, thank you.


  • Rheea gold member
    February 24
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    you make me smile with this one


  • Lonely
    February 23

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    Oh this one is passionate.. You have always been so good at writing all kinds of topic, and you always amaze me, you put "life" in your words, and move the reader with your beautiful poetry.. I love your work sweetie!

    Love always,
    Lonely


  • Stardust-luvr
    February 22

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    HOT in amazing wonderment passion is deff in yur soul and it exudes in magnitudes mmmmmm well done my dear and many many blessings always xxxxxx


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 22
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    Very passionate and enticing read. Eroticism at its finest. Well penned.


  • poet2angels gold member
    February 21

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    WHOA BRO ....lol You write anything and make it amazing

    "Twisting the tides as her eyes turn upward,
    feeling my love owns her trust eternal
    Her outer shell saturated with wounds,
    as I listen to her body language."

    awwww you bring some sensually sweet even into erotica...thats the way it should be

    Sis


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    February 21

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    Brother, brother, brother
    Whew! Hot!
    I think my monitor melted honey
    Excellent erotica!!! Whew!
    (pssst, I'm telling Mom you made me blush! )


  • PerfectImperfection
    February 21

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    Damn bro... Wow. Sheesh lol... This is GOOD!!! A very well spun piece of dominance, submissive intent, and desire proclaimed - in such a poetic tone of beauty beneath the veil. I am in awe - so powerful in rare form!!! Nicely done!


  • Jaydess
    February 21

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    quite good

    Not really my cup of tea, but still an excellent write. The imagery is wonderful, and though, like I said, it isn't my cup of tea, the way you've done the last couple lines really made me smile. Call me dominatrix, if you shall, but I much prefer to dominate than be dominated. Lol!


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    February 21

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    Oh Wow! such a sexy sacrifice, loved the title

    to be tangled like this you made it felt so sacred...very descriptively beautiful...you made dark so very sexy and pristine.

    for me this is Gold
    love,
    Fly Shy


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 21

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    HOLY SHIT

    enough to be said...

    Great job and you nailed this out of the....yea.

    love
    Passions


  • StarEyes
    February 21

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    WOW! What a read! This is amazing! Not my normal type of read, but WOW!

    I think I see a gold in your future!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 21
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    *hands you some gold*

    Awesome, bro.


  • Soft-Rain
    February 21
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    well wow!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 21

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    You really have a way with words!
    I loved reading this from beginning to end.
    Very beautiful and sensual all the way through.
    Well done as always brother and all the best to
    you with it in this contest! It's always a pleasure
    to read your work here. Thanks a lot for sharing it!




    Jeremy0826


  • Introvert2006
    February 21
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    If I were to tell you of my fav parts in this write, I would have to copy and paste the whole damn piece. Well done my poetic friend, wonderful use of vocab in all the right places and spaces.


  • EeyoreUK
    February 21

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    you missed the 'n' in your title ....
    such a change from your recent writes....
    never expect anything but to be unexpected
    best of luck


  • poetryrocksmysox
    February 21

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    Wow~

    Anything you put your poetic pen to, any topic, your love shines through. This is deep, and I like how your words tell of trust within pain's pleasure. Again, you my poetic sox, and I'll be reading you as you write! This here reads like gold to me, mucho love sweet soul! K~


  • Angelflower
    February 21

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    you did it.. omg you really did it.. yay!!! lol.. well damn, I really liked this write.. sensual and let me tell you, those images are.. wow.. lol.. bravo hun you really did a wonderful job with this write.. shocked the hell out of me.. but in a good way lol.. best of luck in the contest!

    Angel

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