Unaccomplished memories
Strove through minds unyielding
Tears cascade down faces
While rain pours solemnly
Down...down...down...
Cradling heart in hands
Beating, but bruised
Whole, but cracked
Left alone
In ice shattering downpour
Caressing blistered heart
...She waits.
A contest entry
- Funny...Deadly.. by Lady Michaella.
475 points, ended March 2, 2009, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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ooooo!! this is a powerful one.. very well written indeed... fantastic work.. such dark imagery..
oo... this is great... very well written, incredibly unique... great job!
thanks so much for entering my contest,
and best of luck to you!!
your judge,
-Lemon Bee-
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hmmm... an interesting take on the prompt...
I can't wait to read it when you're finsihed!! 
Take care, Sis, and keep it flowing!!
, 
& s always,
xx Cyn xx
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Its finished sis, Sorry about the depressing one, but I am not good at funny writes
But you know this already, it's either depression or erotica for me
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