Clothes sticking to me like glue,
skin peeling like nailpolish.
The heat torments my burnt skin,
blistering my heart.
I've been lying in the sun for days,
but you didn't come.
A contest entry
- Funny...Deadly.. by Lady Michaella.
475 points, ended March 2, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quick Blurb!! by Jepardy.
400 points, ended April 26, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is amazing. I just adore it. So simple and nearly silly, yet the way you end it, you last line makes it seem so so much more deep and meaningful. Just brilliant. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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WOW!!!! this is fantastic..... very well written... one of the best so far... very well done!
oo... this is great... very well written, incredibly unique... great job!
thanks so much for entering my contest,
and best of luck to you!!
your judge,
-Lemon Bee-
xx
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