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The Coffee Break And Stumbling Upon Roses With Care

Looking through the glass window
Of an elite café opposite children’s park,
My eyes fell on the well-patched frock of
A skinny young girl aged four, or may be five,
With a running nose, that made her look all the more innocent!

She held a basket in one of her hands, and was too busy
Counting the roses in them!
One... Two... Three... Four... Five...

Having sipped the last drop of coffee
From what looked like an expensive cup,
I stepped out of the café when she looked at me
With hungry eyes and asked me to buy one of the roses.
~Indian Rupees Five for a Rose~

I looked at the array of a dozen crimson roses,
And they did not look fresh at all.
I did not complain.
Instead, I handed over my wallet to her saying, ‘Keep it in exchange
For your basket of roses!’

The girl obeyed as if it was a command.

The next day, my eyes fell on the young girl again
As I sipped coffee in the same cafe (close by my office)
During the break!

She held a basket in one of her hands, and was too busy
Sniffing the roses in them!

Having sipped the last drop of coffee from my cup
I stepped out of the café when she looked at me
With a spark of contentment in her eyes, and said,
‘The roses in this new basket are fresh!’

I was just about to pick out my new wallet
From the same old pocket, when she finally announced,
“These roses are not for sale!
I have arranged them for you as a note of thanks.
Please accept them; O angel of mercy!”

I obeyed as if it was a command.

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  • mina nagi gold member
    March 22

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    what a beautiful story... poverty is a curse and heart of gold is a blessing..
    i had a similar sort of experiance ... pls. read this in your spare time...http://storywrite.com/story/7912
    keep it up with the good work......

    mina


  • poet2angels gold member
    March 5

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    This is lovely!
    Such a delight to read...
    I love roses and flowers of any kind..
    This was like picking a fresh bouquet

    Lynda


  • Jacob S. Steadman
    February 22

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    Touching story.

    I hope this really happened as it has filled me with a sense of optimism about the human race. I really enjoyed it, as simple as that.

  • patrick20traveler
    February 21
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    A wonderful story.


  • wwfhrocks14
    February 21
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    This is beautiful. Very well done.

  • Eusebius
    February 21

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    Interesting, intriguing and a most poignant piece of verse... very deftly done and brilliantly concieved piece. A simply marvelous write!!!


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    February 21
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    this is a sweet story, i enjoyed the read


  • Puppydog gold member
    February 21

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    THIS BROUGHT WARM, SWEET TEARS TO MY EYES!!!

    It is stories like this that warms ones heart and soul! 's I need to hear these wonderful stories to keep up my faith in this world.

  • penelopephoebe
    February 21
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    Very poignant poem. I liked it a lot.


  • Dead creature
    February 21

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    Awl' she thought he was an angel?
    Good poem/Good words
    Just lovely !! breath taking loved it!

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