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Red and White

It's time to for the peppermint harvest:
Let's get going-gotta get started;
Those candies aren't gonna pick themselves,
Come on everybody, let's fill some pails.

Icy-cold outside in the night,
Peppermint vines shine in moonlight;
I wonder how high we can go-
How far up the ladder we climb;
It's time for the red and white show:
Oh look! Here comes the talking mime.

Red and White:  my delight;
My green leaves, come here please;
Suzy Q, I need you;
Peppermint:  gone and went.

Crisp air surrounds when there's no sun,
My hand's stay numb 'till the job's done;
No feeling in my nose as well-
Carnival fun with a clown;
Cause the weather opposes hell
I can live life without a frown.

Red and White:  my delight;
Black disease, on my knees;
Come alter the altar;
Peppermint:  gone and went.

Red and White:  my delight;
Black to white, day from night;
Loosely based on good taste;
My sweet mint:  I have bent.

Author notes

Here is another weird song with deeper meaning hidden well.
It's not about drug, but I'd like to hear different interpretations.
Comments and Critique Always welcomed!
Hope you enjoy and God Bless!

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