With no sight to line,
All but shadows and deceit,
I’m masked, but you’re blind
To not even see
The liquid of careless lies
That do not run clear,
But are tampered with.
Although I seem like a fraud,
I'm always believed.
Author notes
Picture: "CroC-teaRs". Deviant: aequitasozzy
A contest entry
- Picture Prompts Haiku/Senryu (contest) by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended March 6, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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Nice take on the prompt. You want your haikus to stand alone, but be connected in ideas. No commas within the haikus itself. Nice job! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It’s an honor to have you show your work here!
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this is a very nice poem, very expressive very good use of contrasting ideas, very well done...PK
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