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Lost Promises

The words are lost,
Is the unknown sea,
Of lies and broken thoughts.
You said you always kept your word,
Always did everything,
But it's a lie.
I do everything in my power,
Everything I can,
To make my promises come true.
You are nothing but a no good
Promise breaker.
I can't say I'm perfect,
I can't say I'm wonderful,
But I  can say I do everything I can.
I won't say I will unless I know I can.
I won't say I will do unless I have time.
You on the other hand,
Use promises to cover up the bad and take away the good.
You are full of lots of things,
I am not going to name them all,
But you are full of one thing,
Lost promises.

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