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Shaded eyes

  I can't beleive I fell for those deceitful lie's
I was confused caught up in deceit
I could'nt tell what was black from what was white
hidden behind those shaded eye's

I got caught up in this haze
you were like a complicated maze
I fell for you schemes they got
caught up in our dreams
they were all lie's
hidden behind those
shaded eye's

They say the eyes are the window
of a woman's soul
your's was as
black as
coal

 

                                                     

 

J                                                            2/20/09

 

Author notes

just a jaded view of love at that time

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  • zibs
    November 24
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    Oh wow...
    I have felt this before, and I fell into this poem.
    I love how it was written in a descending format, and the background plays in, and it all works together very well.
    As for the actual writing...um...AMAZING! You really made me remember how it felt when I found out the lies I had been fed, and this really makes me remember them, without forcing me to relive them too much.
    Loved it
    zibs

  • summore
    November 19
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    Sometimes sunglasses is a give away that something is being hidden. Notice the word "Sometimes". Although I too wear 'em ~ They say the eyes are the window of a woman's soul.~


  • dead soul 666
    February 20
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    i feel your pain