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keep walking planes in search of mountains

 

 

And those of us with average faces
plucking hair strands while running mazes,
taking all the beating of thunderous days,
finding the roads that lead to ways,
that lead to streets that read “Nothing Here.”
And now, somehow, taking the salt of tired out tears
and chapping the strict smiles of
those of us with average faces
running mazes, that lead to the streets

that lead to the start of no where.
There is no change and no range of mountains.
And so, those of us with average faces
have average clothing, worn with much loathing -
Those of us with average faces

don’t settle for rags, but dream of laces.
Running mazes on flat plane looking for hills and mountains,
speaking of scathing faces on altitude’s killing chill
and we keep running mazes looking for those places
but who cares, there’s still a few more hairs
left on average heads
And those of us with average faces work for broken threads
and pray they turn themselves to laces.  

Author notes

Just Reni is an aunt again! --------- Annora Ariellee Sommerville 02-19-09 says:
you know, having what the average person has but always wishing for the grand all of it but never really putting much effort into getting it...Like looking for mountains on wide open fields.
Just Reni is an aunt again! --------- Annora Ariellee Sommerville 02-19-09 says:
running on flat planes and wishing for altitudes.


That kinda stuff, you know. I reckon you do.

Enjoy,
-Reni

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 22, 2009

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    First off, your background is awesome. Very cool looking

    Secondly, I like this piece. Your flow/rhyme scheme is well penned. It wasn't choppy at all. Very well penned


  • stepbystep
    March 1, 2009
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    great,

    this was awesome.
    =)
    keep it up!