nervous and inflamed as she was
he ripped off his shirt
buttons flew
his warm kiss turned earnest
her blouse landed on the cat
bra on the ceiling fan
he savored her neck and shoulders
lowered his eyes to her breast
he stared enchanted by her vision
sampled one, challenged the other to peak
heard her exhale and nearly lost it
restrained himself and nibbled-
administered euphoria to each crest
that begged for attention
he parted her legs as he knelt
discovered her love bud with the gold ring
kissed and suckled her treasure
manipulated her till she came
with spasms in his mouth
he laid her on the bed
entered her patiently and relaxed
she grimaced with pain
he let her adjust with his hard invasion
he advanced in and out
fast hard deep
both moan and sighed
as they went to heaven together
as she quivered around him
draining every ounce of pleasure
then nine months later...
Author notes
This is a new journey for a couple.
Michael
A contest entry
- Sensually Yours by jul.
700 points, ended April 2, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'm Crazy....but OH WELL!!! PREWRITE CONTEST!!!! by Kathraina.
575 points, ended April 18, 296 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very lovely write.
Vivid imagery and alot of emotion invoked here.
Stunning! Bravo!!!
♥ Kate
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WOW! Absolutely amazing! Thanks for entering and best wishes to you.
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nice
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Wow
Thanks for entering my contest, I especially liked the line, "her blouse landed on the cat"
But I stated in the preamble that poems longer than twenty lines would be disqualified.
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Simply breathtaking Michael. Enjoyed this.
best wishes to you in the contest.
Love
Passions
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This is a beautiful sensual piece for two who take the journey of marriage in love and forever's...sigh...how wonderful it would be ~Luce
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Journey
What a beautiful and wonderful destination that they will soon arrive at.....again you out did yourself....keep writing you are amazing!
Kristin
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