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Tango of The Night

Here in the darkness, The moon full and bright, Our bodies move as one.
Inside, outside, An invisible force.
Heated passion, Passes silent between us, Breathless we move as one,
Lost in the tango of the night.
A gentle breeze, On enflamed skin, Lost in each other, Tangled limbs.
Move like liquid pleasure, As the music takes control, Possesed we move as one,
Taken over by the tango of the night.
Racing hearts, Beneath heaving chests, Trembling pulses, As passion ignites.
Skin brushes skin, Lips part, Breathless torment.
Unrestrained we move as one,
Giving ourselves to the tango of the night.
Sweat glistens, Moans of pleasure, Senses filled with one another.
Inside, outside, Within, without.
Completing one another, Totally entwined, Together we move as one,
Filled with the passion of the tango of the night.
Moving together, Panting for breath, Moaning for more.
Taken over by lust, Surrounded by music.
Engulfed in the darkness, Lost in one anothers desire.
Losing control we move as one,
Taken in the darkness we do the tango in the night. 










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Option 1. Prompts 6: Dirty Dancing and 19: Feel like making love

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  • spiritraven
    June 10

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    Well written

    Lot of imagery and great flow. Very sensual and a joy to read. You have captured this so well. Thank you so much for sharing

  • division
    May 25

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    Title: 10/10
    Content: 15/20
    Originality: 20/20
    Emotion: 10/10
    Imagery: 7/10
    Prompt: 20/20
    Grammar: 6/10
    Total: 88/100

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    I loved the poem! So much emotion, love, passion, feeling, that you felt the love the couple had for each other! What a great job!

    Though I think you could work a little bit more on grammar and stanza organization. That's all! Good job and good luck!


  • hollowriver
    May 14

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    hey ya

    "Taken over by lust, Surrounded by music.
    Engulfed in the darkness, Lost in one anothers desire.
    Losing control we move as one,
    Taken in the darkness we do the tango in the night." that is my favorite part of the poem. This piece of poetry is stunning and captivating, truly remarkable. There is so much feeling and emotion pored into each line and every single word; makes you think, I love when poetry makes you think that’s the best part about poetry the thought and feeling lingering in your head after words see now you know you did something right I’m ranting aren’t I? I just wanted you to know that I really enjoyed this write keep up writing well penned literature bravo! You should be proud.


  • Ice Queen
    May 1

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    WOW!

    This is a wonderfully written piece. I loved it, good job!


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    March 24

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    Wow this is wonderfully written. All about making love you made your point LOL. It was a pleasure to read this.


  • Angelflower
    March 6

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    what a lovely poem, I love the format of this write. and the lay out was perfect for it.. The way it read was lovely too, and the imagery was nice and vivid. Thank you very much for your wonderful entry, I truly enjoyed reading this.. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    March 5

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    Completing one another, Totally entwined, Together we move as one,
    Filled with the passion of the tango of the night.

    I loved this part. Excellent write! Thanks for entering


  • DancingQueenAngi
    March 1

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    What a great way to describe something so beautiful! Your analogies and description was wonderful and expressive! Beautiful write!

    Thanks!
    ~Angi

  • Loves HER Master
    February 20

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    this is amazing. there's so much intense imagery put into this. the way it's written, it could be erotic, but it also could just be the tango tango well either way, it was a great read. and good luck in the contest

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