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Quiet Overture to Learning

Barely can breathe, I know I'm crossing some lines
And it's refreshing next to these memories
Of her
Because that's all sort of getting old, so time
For something new

Who needs hands when they grip too tightly,
Or an open heart that shares only wounds?
I'm caked in dried blood, so
Cleanse me well and take me
For something new

Author notes

Inspired by Ben, Switchfoot, and Molly, in that order

to those concerned: I don't mean it that way. lol

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  • StarIlluminated
    February 21
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    Cool poem meredith. I liked it. I don't have any criticsm cuz it's good!

    *KT*