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Yesterday's News

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Yesterday’s News

 

Old souls trickle tears of yesterday’s pang,

hymns in those hollow shadows die daily

Lost love has forgotten the innocent,

angel breath breathe light's strength to renew me.

 

I fall on my own, need no rushing winds,

storms inhale my morning breath in dead cold

As I exhale light’s only oxygen ,

my words I drag by the wayside untold.

 

Fear is frozen to the blind eyes unseen,

as the doorway of death swings by my way

Kisses of candy don’t share their flavor,

and sunrises no longer share bright rays.

 

All notes left play jazz and yesterday’s blues,

each offer I’ve made in love you refuse.

 

Yesterday’s News

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pick prompt: http://media.photobucket.com/image/heart/freaksphotos/heart.jpg?o=14

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  • penman gold member
    March 10
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    Excellent

    Such a powerful write. So very well done. And so deserving of the silver.


  • AnarchistXxXLove
    March 6
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    Wow this is an amazing write, congrats on the trophy great write, and again great job


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    February 27

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    ~All my love, thank you for sharing this masterpiece, Sharon~

    ~Dearest Timothy~

    Your skills and talent to portray pain
    Is here in this magnificent write
    You have the gifts of divine insight
    I wish you love all your long life

    Oh baby the shadow that hangs over me
    Haunting as the tracks of yesterdays rain
    I was never playing a game
    Our love is one eternal flame

    Blinded by youth and curiosity
    Turning into the deep blue sea
    How can I compete with a star above?
    As I wrap you sweetly in wings of love

    Lover please remember
    We do it all for love
    Take away your fame
    And we are the same

    And all I can do is weep silently
    In the ruby stains on your white sleeve
    Has left me forsaken on my knees

    Just for the sake of history
    The love of you, I never refuse
    I did not know where to turn
    Lover my heartstrings burn
    Standing on the sidelines blue
    Darling I will never forget you

    Love is our only need
    This is what I believe
    Love is our only need
    This is what I believe








  • Lonely
    February 23

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    oh, this is such a sad poem, it touches the heart, and oh the image goes with it, it makes it even more piercing, there is like a sea of emotions flowing through this wonderful piece of poetry, a masterpiece this one is! Wow! Keep writing my lovely Tim

    Love,
    Lonely


  • Stardust-luvr
    February 22

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    wow another tearjerker as salty taers spill from emptiness and darkened forgetfulness to be left broken in the shadows of nothingness and doubt. well done and much love and many blessings always xxxxx


  • Jalalbad gold member
    February 22

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    what a picture! your poem is magical as always. Its hard to write a review for someone as gifted as you so I leave you with a smile and a golden wish for the contest
    love,
    Judy


  • 245Trioxin
    February 21

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    It just gets better and better with each line. The final three I read repeatedly. Two unparticular are so hauntingly familiar.

    It's like... trying to learn math... 2 apples + 2 oranges = 2 apples and 2 oranges. that's what our math teachers would tell us, but I would say, nay (we) would say... 2 apples + 2 oranges = 4 pieces of fruit.

    We're both right and wrong. This is why we suffer so. The world isn't designed around our 5th dimensional way of thinking. Truth is false, love is deceit... Our eyes know the path, but it's not the way everyone else travels.

    Btw...

    It's almost comical that you used that picture considering my latest write.

    Panged up people are like peas in a pod, eh' brother?


  • StarEyes
    February 21

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    WOW! this is heartwrenching! What a read! One can feel every bit of pain that is in this one! OMG! I love it!

    Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love my sweet friend

    Nyetta


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 20
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    Such sorrow, your pen works magic on these pages.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 20
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    well penned.

    Love
    you

    Tory


  • Angelflower
    February 20

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    ok.. that ending really broke my heart for some reason... You did such a wonderful job with this write hun.. I truly loved it as I'm sure many others will as well.. best of luck in the contest.

    Angel

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