as I hold her…
I marvel; beautiful eyes,
nose,
lips…
I think she knows,
I’m about -
to kiss her
Author notes
Malabu style; new love, short and simple
A contest entry
- the Passion Of Love...(contest for lovers) by poet2angels.
875 points, ended March 2, 2009, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is so adorable....
Sweet and romantic....I know you
LOVE THIS....
sigh~
Lynda
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Oh I love this, and your new style, for even in brevity your chosen words just fill the heart!
Such a lovely piece!!!
Jazzy
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Expressing so much using so few words. I am stunned into silence!
Mariana
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I love it. Very sweet and passionate.
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well, we would too, it's kind of infectious to say, you do it well. A nice slant on thinning (h)air,
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wow
short and sweet. It sounds like you turn on the charm. So she must be very special. Very much a pleasure to read your work.
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I'm sure she does, hey, I wish I could say much in few words. envious? yes!
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Oh yeh..
This is the mally I adore!
Such a loverboy.
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who me?
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Indeed But that's your signature.
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thank you, for the smile
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