Earth's morning calls to us once again
With her hills all dressed in green
The robin treats us to his song
As spring arrives on the scene
The sky again is spread with blue
Smiling sunbeams greet each hour
White clouds drift by,oh so serene
As spring unfolds like a flower
Awake with life the woods and fields
Spill over with creatures brand new
The world once more a busy place
As spring's fullness burst into view
I join the awakening of the earth
The song of it sings to my soul
Worldly cares seems so far away
As Spring in my heart takes control
A contest entry
- Huguenauties Contest No.#41 for MEMBERS OF HUGH WYLES FAVOURITES GROUP ONLY by huguenauties.
750 points, ended February 24, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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your poems seem very nice and in any event it is an enormous accomplishment to write 1000 poems much less post them somewhere!!! and obviously you have taken great attention in the presentation (format, background materials surrounding etc.) congratulations
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though spring is here it has still been a little nippy here i think, mind you where i live it always seems to be the case! i am waiting for the days to get warmer, but it is nice to know winter is over and spring is finally here, a good poem celebrating the rebirth season.
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very well written. good job.
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What a wonderful tribute to Spring, which I hope is just around the corner, and your picture is beautiful.
Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
All the best
Sue
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This is a lovely poem I enjoyed the read thank you for sharing this with me I really loved the third stanza best wishes always be well.
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I really like the graphic, it held my eyes for quite some time.
we have an apricot tree that is in full blossom when none of our other fruit trees are. I hope it doesn't get nipped by frost it isn't even March yet so I know winter can't be over ... well, we'll see. -
Hi, such a pretty poem, yes I think fickle spring might just be around the corner, lovely write my friend, hugs Di
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Should the word be fields?
"Awake with life the woods and field"
I really love this and REALLY can't wait until spring comes!!!
And then I can't wait until spring, summer, and fall pass so I can get to February of next year when he comes home!
(by the way, this is Bunnybabe89 from before)
Great poem and I'm happy to be back on the site from before. I missed reading yours and others poetry.
~Sarah
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I am so looking forward to Spring; "Smiling sunbeams greet each hour"that I know for sure. By reading this poem, I also knew these words would lift my doldrums. That is exactly what happened. It seems the winter has lasted far too long already but I know that Spring is just around the bend and that makes me glow from inside out. Beautiful work here dear Susan. I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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This is really beautiful and wonderful. Great.
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oh thank you so much for this for it did so warm my heart, spirit and soul. i welcome spring as this cold continue to grip us in its claws. this is so special.
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brilliant
no suggestions from me, besides a salute! -
no contest
No contestment from me! This is a lovely poem; you've really sharpend your skill with this style. That is, keeping the sentence length just right, relying on metaphor and judacious use of imagery sparing use of words. BOLwtP
-darmok
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AWSOME
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excellent imagery
You sure have a way with the nature poems. Your words create such lovely visions for all of us to enjoy as we read.
Best of luck in this contest!
Jeannette 
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“Earth's morning calls to us once again
The sky again is spread with blue
Awake with life the woods and field
As spring's fullness burst into view
I join the awakening of the earth
With her hills all dressed in green
The song of it sings to my soul
As spring arrives on the scene”
VERY good.
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Very beautiful poem Susan. You are wonderful at writing nature poems. Good luck in the voting.
Hine
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Very nice
"As spring's fullness burst into view" if you add 's' to bursts
it keeps the poem in the same tense.
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A beautiful poem that applauds the re-birth of Spring and everything that emanates from it. I wish you a happy healthy Spring.
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This is very beautiful and with colourful imageries. A lovely preview of Spring
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Ah, Susan, your spirit sings
in joyful tone, no matter
what life brings.
Love and hugs to you,
M-C
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Lovely poem Susan that you've written and I hope you are feeling better.
Good luck in the voting
Jen
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lovely
The imagery of the earth bursting with new life makes my heart leap. This is lovely, Susan, and it flows so well. Best of luck!
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Dear Molly,
You paint a most delightful scene
of coming growth and Spring
but, in NZ our Spring has been
and Summer's on the wing.
In fact we had ten lovely days
of heat and cloudless skies
when girls in bright bikinis lazed
before my very eyes.
But now it's turned to cold and grey
the girls have left the beach
and, though I look there every day
there's none within my reach.
Please send some global warming here
so we can have our Summer
'coz rain at this time of the year
and wintry cold's a bummer!
Your poem warmed my heart though. I guess the sun is still there somewhere, if only the overcast sky would let it through.
Applause for your beaut entry, hope you're feeling better.
Good luck in the voting, love and hugs, XXX Hugh (R.) Da,
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Lovely poem, Sis! There's so much life in your poem (reflecting all things bright and new)! Best of Luck in the contest! I hope the warmer weather hastens healing for you and for all of us who have succumbed to the cold and flu season.
Love and Hugs,
♥ Maureen
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Beautiful as always, Sis You're so sincere and talented with your nature poems. I'm glad you made it into the contest but sorry you're feeling so bad. Maybe the spring weather will help, I sure hope so.
Dee
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This is a wonderful tribute to Spring...and a testimony to your love of life...Good luck in the contest...
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Very beautiful indeed. You certainly have a way with words. I hope you are feeling much better soon.
Much love and prayers,
Linda
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very nice, oh how i wish it was spring, i want to get outside, i hate the cold and snow, this is very pretty, maybe spring will come sooner now..
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There's nobody who writes nature poems like our beautiful Blushfulmoon! This one is a real gem and I love it! 
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good
Nature a beaitful thing, I enjoyed the green imagery I can almost smell the trees.very well
done,There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one
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Well, I'm not a member hon, but this poem is a delight for the senses! I can't wait for spring and this makes me yearn all the more for it.. Well done!
Get well soon..
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aw a very beautiful poem I love your imagery and depth throughout I love the image to and background good luck in the contestmaralisa
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wonderful
Oh my what a beautiful creation. You did great. Best of luck in contest.
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