A love that fluttered your heart
You fall in love with this person you believe is the one
You expect to be happy and enjoy this new found fun
You feel so special to have this person call you their own
Until things spiral downward and everything feels wrong
The time you spend together is limited because he's too busy
To you it's hard but to him it comes easy
You wonder what is it that caused this sudden change
Was it something you did?
Was it something you said?
What now?
What now?
When it Hurts
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oh my friend..
love is great when it's brand new, it's exciting for a month or two..whenever things start to dull from it's shine..real-life can find you in a bind..yup..know it well..good write, but very sad..
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I ask that question alot. very relatable. Nice write!
<3 Tiffany
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Hi sis
You feel so special to have this person call you their own
Until things spiral downward and everything feels wrong
The time you spend together is limited because he's too busy
To you it's hard but to him it comes easy
You wonder what is it that caused this sudden change
Was it something you did?
Was it something you said?
What now?
What now?
THis whole poem is maginficent. Enjoyed reading it its off day chain n I can relate to this poem I understand where u coming from with this poem here.. U have alsome work n marvelous talent. I often have felt this way plenty of times.. I just get up n dust my feet off n Handle my Business for as me concern..N do what I gta do for me now..I feel alot better.. Thanks so much for ure advice that bein given to me n the readin of your poems it has helped me out tremedoulsy n U too.. Love ya lots sis.. Once again Oustandin poem..
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Wow, this is such a relatable piece. So many people have felt this way. I know I have. I really felt the depth of the pain within the words of this piece. Great write. - cgirl0410
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