Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

cliche confession

The words you speak inspire me
They weave webs into my mind
Entrapping my common sense

If wanting you is wrong
Then i dont want to be right
Such a cliche confession
But ive never admitted something so true..

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • metal4ever
    July 27
    Edit | Reply
    this was actually really good, the title really catches the readers attention, awesome job and keep it upp


  • LovesLostLiterature
    February 21
    Edit | Reply
    Wow sunshine I like it!