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"Alzheimer's"

Minds gripped by the beginning of senility
Unable to stop the spews of vulgarity
Brought forth from minds that don’t know
Why they went or where they go.
Wondering aimlessly in this trap
Of a mind that has turned to crap.
Lost though they tried not to
Lose this knowledge of you.

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  • Dobar Dan
    March 5
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    Good One Fallen Angel

    I don't think I have Oldsymers but I do need to write things down more ---and go to my shop to get someting and stand there wondering "WHAT AM I DOING HERE" lol - but that comes with age - I'll be 72 on the 10th great poem - nice ryme and delivery - Bless God - Joe - have a great day