what am i fighting for,
this is pointless,
we start to scream,
and my body become jointless,
what am i screaming for,
what is the use,
i try to stay strong,
and the tears become loose,
what am i crying for,
love that is no more,
getting my heart broken,
in this cold thing you call war,
what am i aiming for,
im rotting to the core,
what the hell is this for?!
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Good work
well done,and very much enjoyed awesome closing. inspirational good flow of words. There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one
-P.s. I think white letters would be better.
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