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The Cheese That Came Alive

One day a girl named Talia was very hungry.
She wondered what treat she should eat...
She thought "Man I would sure like a cheese sandwich."
So she opened the fridge,
and when she reached for the cheese,
Something weird happened...

The cheese yelled "HEY!! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING?"
"DON'T EAT ME OR I'LL BE SUING!"
Talia yelled and closed the fridge.
She hoped that the cheese hadn't really talked to her.
So she opened the fridge and looked at the cheese,
And when the cheese saw the light it gave out a big sneeze.

Talia yelled again and the cheese said,
"Will you please be quiet?!"
"And while your at it, you should go on a diet!"
Though Talia was very skinny,
The cheese was very insulting.


The cheese and Talia became friends,
Even though it was very weird.
Talia did lose some weight,
And the cheese did grow a beard!!!

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  • lindaburns gold member
    November 21
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    Your imagination is REALLY working. Congratulations on the Gold Trophy. Good work.

  • PianoMan
    June 3
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    Oops. Already commented. Lol. Oh well. It deserves two(or three now). Lol....

  • PianoMan
    June 3

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    Ok wow. Lol. That has to be the best poem about cheese I've ever seen. Lol. I totally love cheese but I REALLY hope that that never happens to me. Awesome poem and congratulations on the gold trophy!


  • White Tiger 96
    March 12
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    Very creative!!! funny too! Keep writing, i look forward to reading more from you!!!!

  • PianoMan
    February 28
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    Wow. That is definitely an interesting poem you wrote. Lol. I really hope that never happens to any of my cheese because I TOTALLY LOVE CHEESE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lol. Great job!!


  • longlife
    February 26
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    thats hilarious,great job


  • Number-1-Popcorn-Fan
    February 26
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    Lol! Very Funny. Nice gold trophy.


  • savingreign
    February 24
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    awesome!

    omigoodness. you're hysterical. how do you come up w/ such a funny poem???? It's Amazing!


  • Lanasaur
    February 24

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    Funny!

    This is hiillarious.......Amazing poem 'hahah' great job!good luck in my contest,
    Have a cheesy day

    Lana


  • Anonymous Spark
    February 21

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    LOL
    hillarios poem

    where did u get the idea from

    ?

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    February 20

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    WOW! This is great slick! I love fantasy poems.
    Thanks for sharing; good luck in the contest.
    Brian


  • Melodies
    February 20

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    HAHAHAHAHA!!! Was it a GREEN MOLDY beard? I can see it now! It's probably in my refrigerator and looks like a science project. You have written a very smart and funny poem and I love the way you rhymed it. SO COOL!


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    February 20

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    This definitely has your crazy sense of humor, Slick! Lots of weird stuff!!! I wonder how bearded cheese tastes?????


  • Denerica silver member
    February 20

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    LOL,Of course it would age so to speak and mold! Loved the cheese telling her to go on a diet. Cleverly creative. Blessings

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