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between River and Rock pt. I: noon

There’s much that we don’t undergo
but, puppies collar-drawn by cart,
submit, and hide ourselves deep down
  inside – our underground.

Beneath, it seems small shadow-dreams
  nourished by deeper, darker soil
blossom more brightly, even, than
  the light beyond night skies.

So balanced, even, beyond breath
  puppets self-drawn by master strings,
  eyes hollowed from the inside out
  to swallow everything,
    we see.

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