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Come with me

God saw you getting tired
And a cure was not to be;
So he put his arms around you
And whispered
"Come With Me"
With tearful eyes we watche you
And so you passed away.
Athough we loved you dearly,
We could not mak you stay.
A golden heart stopped beating,
Hard workin hands at rest.
God broke our hearts to prove to us
He only takes the best.

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  • tellnotalesxx
    March 11

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    yeahh uu copieedd thiss frommmm somee placee and someonee becauseee thiss was saidd at my grandpas funearll likeee a good week agoo and theyy saidd it was byy this guyyy soo this isnt your workk soo yeahhh dont take credit for someone elses workkkk.


  • Maedes
    February 20

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    ohhh...
    God is the creator, we belong to Him
    we need to use our time wisely
    as we do not know when He will put His arms around us saying 'come with Me'

    thanks for sharing

    carpe diem


  • Cant force beloved
    February 20

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    I'm sorry for your loss of a loved one, but God doesn't take people in death, imperfection is what kills us, not God. The Bible speaks of a resurrection hope, you likely will get to see this person again. The apostle Paul said: "I have hope toward God, which hope these [men] themselves also entertain, that there is going to be a resurrection of both the righteous and the unrighteous."

    I hope you find comfort.