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Wowzer What A Catch***

I am so full of devilment ,
love pulling a joke or two.
And my mind seems to be turning,
always with a new muse.

My sister and I love to go fishing,
and get so excited with every catch.
I snuck around the bend and rigged my pole,
with an artificial blow up gator real fast.

I tied a good size rock to it
so that it would sink you see,
And stayed real quiet
for a moment I was  so pleased.
Then I threw out my other pole
and commenced to yell,
told my sister hurry I caught two
I need some help.

Oh she threw down her pole
and came running indeed,
I took the pole and was acting like I had something
and gave her the other you see.
She commenced to real it in
and was excited as could be,
that is untill that rock came loose
and that gator she did see.

Ha Ha Ha I was rolling on the ground,
when she threw down that pole
and was pickup bound.
I swear I could see a puff of smoke
Kicking up from her heals,
yet I was rolling on the bank
when she said we are gone , so get it in gear.

After a bit while in a dead run
she looked back real quick,
and I had set my chair back up
and was back fishing I did.
She yelles at me get yourself out of there
for that gator will eat you alive,
And then as I turned laughing
she had Im gonna kill you in her eyes.

Oh but it's a blast when we get together,
pulling jokes it couldnt get no better.
For even though we are two old broads today,
we are still two little girls at play.

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Oh they never know what I might do I m one crazy fun loving lady

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  • Cherrylv
    July 9, 2009

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    Very cute

    Lmao well I think we are all still kids at heart
    You sound as if you had as much fun writing the poem as you did playing the prank

    Cherry xxx


  • movedon
    February 22, 2009

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    gah we need to meet! I know we would be cackaling so hard after only a few minutes I'm sure!! ah! I'm im not laughing im making someone else laugh. i LOVED this one!!!!!

  • bbeestar
    February 22, 2009

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    ILoved It! I could see my sister and I doing the same thing. Those are Happy Times, being together is the best part. Great Job! bbeestar


  • Gypsy Via Orleans
    February 20, 2009
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    i loved this. it brought me back to a time of playing games with my big sister. isn't it great to have that kind of relationship? even when we get older it's still good to be able
    to have that kind of fun. you did a wonderful job of pulling the reader into your prank. as you rolled on the ground laughing, believe me i laughed right along with you.


  • jayyniecakes.
    February 20, 2009

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    Ha Ha Ha I was rolling on the ground,
    when she threw down that pole
    and was pickup bound.
    I swear I could see a puff of smoke
    Kicking up from her heals,
    yet I was rolling on the bank
    when she said we are gone , so get it in gear.

    After a bit while in a dead run
    she looked back real quick,
    and I had set my chair back up
    and was back fishing I did.
    She yelles at me get yourself out of there
    for that gator will eat you alive,
    And then as I turned laughing
    she had Im gonna kill you in her eyes.

    Oh but it's a blast when we get together,
    pulling jokes it couldnt get no better.
    For even though we are two old broads today,
    we are still two little girls at play.

    my fav part.


  • maralisa silver member
    February 20, 2009

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    haha I love this there is nothing wrong with a bit of fun it adds variety to life *dance thank you for sharing


  • Wandering Woodchuck gold member
    February 20, 2009

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    Hilarious. I like this alot. I can just imagine you doing this to your poor sister. This is a great story.

    Well done.

    Mike


  • Dead creature
    February 20, 2009

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    BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO

    Ah! The love of poetry!!
    Its just beautiful
    when its about family!!
    Wonderful and poetic,
    yes this poem is good words well done and said


  • StarEyes
    February 20, 2009

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    This is tooooooo funny! What a great job! And you know, it is fun to play a joke or two on a person now and then! What a great one here!

    and love

    Nyetta

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