False happiness runs
A triumph sprouts armadas
The black angels talk
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Flustering clouds build
A flash of light breaks midnight
Your heart and soul crash
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Author notes
its haiku! i had to do some for the creative writing class im in. its the only thing i have left until i graduate. it's giving me the poetry bug again...
you likey?
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i think i like the second one better. very nice word combos. "flustering clouds", "flash...breaks...midnight" "soul crash". all very nice!
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thanks. yeah the first one was like when i saw a bunch of bad omens.
the second was there was some drama bout to go down. yah. thanks!
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