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The Knife

I'm waiting for a miracle,
I'm holding off my life,
I'm pausing for a minute,
I'm standing at the knife.

I'm watching for some help,
I'm glancing to my side,
I'm gazing at another,
I'm staring deep inside.

I'm hoping for a miracle,
I'm wanting a new life,
I'm longing for a minute,
I'm begging for the knife.

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  • Rheea gold member
    July 4
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    dark write even cowgirls get down sometimes. nice flow.


  • LoveHate
    February 23
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    I really like it,
    relative,sad.. good glad you can put something like this into words..well done


  • lesliemargaret
    February 20
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    i love this

    this is so cool i love it read some of my and leave comments please!!