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Shackled Heart of Passion

Chained by the inducement
of palpitating desire,
in a realm of infidels,
I swoon like dogs in heat.

Wetting myself in dreams
of erotic fascination,
as your phantom silhouette
stains my soul.

Reflections of things
yearned for in the depths
of a reverberating whisper,
cause my heartbeat to flutter.

Summon me to your palor
of delightful decadence,
where we can frolic in
bestial rapture.

Taboo is calling fires
of dragons to play,
sweet as kisses dipped
in the wanton wine of
your searing lips.

Burn baby burn to my infatuations,
until I extinguish like a
volcanic eruption smothered
in oceans of piquant love.

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  • Andiness
    February 26
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    Oh, hell. I forgot the applause!

  • Andiness
    February 26

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    Burn baby burn to my infatuations,
    until I extinguish like a
    volcanic eruption smothered
    in oceans of piquant love.


    I see I'm not the only one who fell in love with this part.

    -Andi-


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 23

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    Wonderful words here my friend!
    Thanks a lot for entering our contest and all
    the best to you with it here!




    Jeremy0826


  • Ephiphany
    February 22

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    You never cease to amaze

    me in your writing honey. I really do love this one. Somehow it seems deeper, as you continue on this journey of enlightenment to one's ear's and eyes of imagining this spoken by such precious lips of yours. Loved it

    ephiphany
    QuietStorm


  • cgirl0410 silver member
    February 22

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    This piece was really good. I really liked the imagery.I really enjoyed this write. You are a master at word play. - cgirl0410


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    February 21
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    Burn baby burn to my infatuations,
    until I extinguish like a
    volcanic eruption smothered
    in oceans of piquant love.

    very hard hitting in my eyes
    this whole piece is very passionate
    and deeply erotic like fast waves
    a nice head pin i love this a whole lot
    i hear trophy bells


  • hotchocolate gold member
    February 21

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    You wrote your ass off on this one and I love it! Great job and good luck in the contest hon


    Wetting myself in dreams
    of erotic fascination,
    as your phantom silhouette
    stains my soul.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 20

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    DAMN is all one can say...DAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMN

    Well done.

    This is awesome

    Good luck to you

    Passions


  • liltulip gold member
    February 20
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    mmmm mmmm

    another wonderful write!!!! made me burn!

  • bluecollarlove
    February 20
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    Darrel

    What a mood you were in.Pretty good.


  • snowbird600
    February 20
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    WOW! That was Hot!
    Burn baby burn to my infatuations until I extinguish like a volcanic eruption smothered in oceans of piquant love.
    Thats enough to put me over the edge!
    My heart is fluttering!!!
    I need a fan here! It got warm all of the sudden!
    Very good write!
    There you go again! :-)

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