The struggles
The pain
Its an everyday thing
You can't ignore it
Nor can you fight it
The pain digs deep
The judging
The name calling
All the hate you have to hear
The way people look at you
How they treat you
When you try to get away
They only bring you down more
You can't ever forget
They always remind you
They make sure you stick out
They make sure you fail
This world is not right
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Hey sis, i love you regardless of who you are and will always be here for you...forever and always sarah
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Dear Alt: How personal ,and touching this one is. I feel for you. Nice job of expressing yourself and your feelings. Love, Janjan xoxo
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thanks for the comment on my poem.
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Hey baby. I love this poem and it has a very good outlook on life. U know just how 2 describe how cruel this world is in2 a poem. U sure can write and i hope u keep writing more. I love u
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Good stuff
Love it, This is a very well written piece, not hard to follow. a very good write and a wonderful take on life. very well done I love the form too, keep up the good work a powerful poetic Potential. There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one
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thanks for the comment on my poem
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