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God of Judgement

he is a good God bringer of the light, he is the dark Lord bringer of the night.  He is the blindman blind as a bat, he is a madman full of Wraith.  He is a great blade full of truth and might, he is Justice born into light.  He is a good king full of sad and striff, he is the evil born in the night.  He is a blind man with no fail nor flaw, He is Justice standing tall.  He is Truth full of light, he is sadness made with striff.

Author notes

Justice is a blind man with truth for a sword, it cuts through desception like a spear, as it sings their time is near.

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