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from the overview on internet trail,
I see an artist
cursively volcanizing flames
irregularly
on stolen paper crumpled of achromatic blossoms

wheels already a lahar,
I've my toy fire truck's hose
adapted for the photo's spark
across my brain, white,

framed by shock

Author notes

4. fire




my feelings based on a true story

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    February 21, 2009

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    wow..I like this well done! I wanted to pick out a few lines that I like ...but I like it all as a whole.







  • MacDad
    February 21, 2009
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    Very Interesting

    Thanks for entering