Confession,
the exclusion of falseness
that culminates to hide discomfort
and unease,
admission remains the price to bare ones soul
for such acts of truthfulness
merely affirm our guilt
facetious moods contract
and though I smile dismissively
the question has been played
could I be that brave,
indeed should such an attempt
be made?.
Those desires I may deny
yet their inaudible candor
screams to be heard,
as my darkened disposition
avails no protection..,
allegations affirm their grip
with such depth I cannot be sincere
and breath with ease
the truth we know
you can run but you cannot hide.
Confess you bastard.
A contest entry
- Confess Now! by LadyLavender.
1250 points, ended March 6, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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now this
I like a lot - and the end is perfect ! the profanity works very well ! a great write - very clever !
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Being catholic myself I do believe I have I have the Father scream this at his wayward flock a time or two!! LOL.....A very intense piece you have penned! Well done....
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Nice concept
I have to say that if your a catholic and look like you do then I'm in heaven.
Thank you for reading this.
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ooo..that ending full of powerful emotion. well said!
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thank you
hey Catie, many thanks for your comments but are you sad in your photo or just strugling for a line.
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Could of...
The beginnning brilliant, would have loved to see stanzas...I can tell that yes a little more time aplied to this write, would at the end transpired a masterpiece.
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Much appreciated
Thank you for your comments and the time you took reading this. I do agree that it needs more work but I'm a lazy writer when I think about it. I get inspired, right what is in my head and then it's over. Kind of like my sex life, opp's
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Wow...make it infectious to try to tell the truth...a challenge. Well written. Blessings.
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I would have loved more time
Thank you for your generous and most welcome comments. I must return the favour.
Terry
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So so
With more time I would have loved to work on this longer but my boss is coming and I have to get something done.
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