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It's a wonderful life

Imagine a love
A life filled with dreaming
Imagine a life
A world filled with meaning

Imagine a room
A chair, not the only
Imagine it's filled
And you're never lonely

Imagine a friend
Who'll stand by your side
Imagine they listen
In you they'll confide

Imagine these riches
Imagine they're yours
Imagine it's you
Imagine it's ours

Imagine you wake
The inconsummate lover
Imagine no more
The dreaming is over

The longing still lingers
And so it fades
The trudging through time
The ploughing through days

It's so immaterial
Ethereal living
Grasping these straws
And left.
With nothing.

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  • Reanna Eryn
    March 15
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    Beautiful write from you. It's indeed a beautiful life.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 25

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    this is a realy good write from you. it says so much with so few words. as i am nick-named 'motor mouth' i can't seem to do as you have done in this write. thank you for sharing and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie


  • teddybare
    February 24

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    superb

    it's always a pleasure finding writes like this...
    writes that momentarily remove us from duality
    lifting the veil from all we think we know...
    the flow an scheme also dance on the tongue
    very well done

    ~teddybare~


  • Snow White Queen
    February 21
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    woo i loved this


  • Leela
    February 21
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    the flow of this is outstanding!!! very nicely done.


  • Misguided Truth
    February 20
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    Aww, this one is so cute! >.<
    This is my favorite one!

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