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Enough

I've had enough of everyone starting this drama
I can't believe how far we have come
to constantly pick and pick and pick until there's nothing left
I can't believe this is what we've become
we really have become vampires
constantly draining one life to another
just to survive
one person's pain has become another's victory
I've had enough
no one's taking my right and my life away
no one has that right
you can't take me down
I won't back down.

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  • loveyouforever
    May 19, 2009
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    woo relly good

    that poem is true
    iv had enough 2
    great job


  • xeroabyss II
    April 26, 2009
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    Ah, people and their people-ish ways.


  • Lexie
    February 20, 2009

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    wow i love this and one part really grabbed my attention on your creativity and your great skills in poetry-
    we really have become vampires
    constantly draining one life to another
    just to survive
    great job