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A Lover's Applause

Wind-swept gentleness
flows through a midnight sky,
whispering sweet melodies
upon delicate orchestrations...

As fingers tenderly caress

silent chords
in this unspoken aria of affirmations,

 

their silhouette duet

reaches its full crescendo --


    ...then a gasp...

 

...and a lover's applause.

 

 

Author notes

Prompt: instrumental love song
30-40 words

For my beloved

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  • Kuranya gold member
    February 22, 2009

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    So beautifully done. I love the line of silent chords, it left me smiling. Best to you in the contest


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 21, 2009

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    How soft and beautiful...the closing is perfect and it floats on the breeze as one reads your words of beauty...lovely work.
    Best,
    mystic


  • Soft-Rain
    February 20, 2009
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    *smile*


  • maralisa silver member
    February 20, 2009
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    a wonderful poem good luck in the contestmaralisa